Show HN:A tale of two landing pages

Last week I asked for feedback on my landing page.

OLD: http://www.appynote.com/index-old.php

After seriously taking to heart the feedback from this post:

http://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=3953543

Ladies & Gents [probably mostly Gents:)]

I present the NEW & IMPROVED:

http://www.appynote.com/

Verdict?