It's Official - Microsoft Doesn't Understand Visual Novels
The feedback from the reviewers seems pretty straight-forward and easy to fix. I may have misunderstood something, but I don't see the approval process as being all that burdensome. Judging by the frequency of your blog posts, it looks like you've been hearing back rather quickly. Isn't it a different story on Apple's AppStore? I hear of devs waiting ages to hear back.
Maybe get a good night's sleep, and try again tomorrow. You only have to fix your screenshots, right? You're so close.
To ALL HN readers: It's a troll post(some guy's personal rant) just to get more clicks on the ads at the sides and bottom. P.S - Someone please flag this from the frontpage!